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Read Assignment: Pages 34- top of 63 in Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

 

Writing Assignment: Chocolate plays a big role in the book we are reading, obviously. But it also plays, at least in the U.S., a big role in  real life, rather than  just fiction. And chocolate is not a new invention by any means. It has a history. It's the history I'd like you to write about, using some techniques we have been talking about in relation to writing.  Those would be the use of transitions along with general and specific statements. 

 

I will be sending you a list of dates and events about the invention and growing enjoyment of chocolate. You are to put them into a smoothly written paragraph that opens with a general statement (See below) and then lists--another word for lists is "chronicles"--the rise of chocolate as a popular snack-- rather than nourishment, no matter what the mother of August Gloop claims. What follows is a short example of what I want you to do.  Note the underlined transitions a long with a sample sentence pattern, I'd like you to try. 

 

Although  ice cream machines are a fairly recent invention, ice cream itself has been with us for a very long time. (General statement that then gets specifically defined) In the 13th century, the explorer Marco Polo returned to Italy from his travels to Asia. He brought with him a recipe for a delicious dessert that resembled sherbet (a kind of ice cream made with water, not cream).  By the 16th century, Marco Polo's recipe had undergone some changes and become what we today call ice cream. In the same century, the recipe traveled to England and France, becoming popular at the dinner tables of the wealthy. By the 17th century, ice cream was known all over Europe and had become the favorite treat of the general public. 

 

 

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    Although the soild chocolate is invented by only about 200 years ago, but it played a big role in the real life thousands of years ago. The Mayan drink it long long ago. And the Spanish had brought the chocolate drinks from Aztec and they made chocolate drinks popular in Europe.

    In 1765, the Americans began to drink chocolate, too. Almost every body in this word likes drinking chocolate!

HI Mark,

 

Great conclusion, and I like how you used a transitional phrase to introduce the reader to the time when Americans started to drink chocolate. You also punctuated the transition correctly.

 

I would have liked to have seen a few more of those transitions as shown in the example about ice cream. You must have had a very busy week. But I'm glad you found time to write.

Now chocolate is the most famous snack in the world. Everybody like it and eat it. Even it will make people become fat like Augustus. But where is the chocolate come from? Let me tell you about it. In the 16th century, The Spanish explorer Hernan Cortez find a drink made by cocoa bean and water in Mexico. He brings it back and plant cocoa tree. Then he made a drink call hot chocolate. That is what we are drinking now. In 1645, cocoa arrives in France when the Spanish Princess Maria Theresa marries Louis XI and brings them with her. The secret is out. Europe knows about chocolate and loves it. Then, in 1712, Americans know the chocolates. They follow the example of British, American eat and drink chocolate too. And in 1865, the best part comes!! First chocolate-making factory opens!!!! And this mean chocolate is open to everyone. But the chocolate is too expensive, only the rich ones can buy it. And in late 19th century, everyone finally can eat chocolate, both rich and poor.

Hello,Laraine

    Today, almost everyone knows chocolate and loves it. It is so delicious. But when was it began to made and for ate? Let me tell you the history about chocolate. 1544, The Spanish explorer  Hernan Cortez conquers Mexico and  brings cocoa beans and know how to make hot chocolate. This time, there isn't much people know chocolate.  In 1865, the first chocolate factory opens in London. Now chocolate opens to everyone.  But most of people can't afford chocolate, so there still were much people can't eat chocolate and feels howgreat it was. During a long time, only rich ones can have chocolate. In the late  nineteenth century, everyone start having and loving chocolate.

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