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Writing Assignment: Writers of fiction, good ones at least, are careful about how they  describe the people they write about. They make it a point to include incidents and behavior along with gestures, clothing, and dialogue, all of which give readers a strong sense of the characters. These bits and pieces of description and dialogue make up what’s called characterization. Taken together, the bits and pieces create a fictional person with a, usually, recognizable personality. Thus we are inclined to say that Charlotte in Charlotte's Web is a loving and loyal friend. Similarly, we might say that Fadi in Shooting Kabul is both brave and devoted to his family.

 

 Please start your writing by explaining generally--Remember our discussion of general and specific language-- how you think Katherine Patterson wants Leslie to be viewed by readers. In other words, how does Patterson characterize her. For example, if I were writing about Jess’s mom, I might open by saying  something like this: “Mrs. Aarons may love her son, but she almost never shows it.Throughout Bridge to Terabithia, she is a cold and demanding task master(person who is always making other people get work done).”

 

 

Then I would become more specific and describe how she never seems to want Jess to rest. As soon  he finishes one job, she finds another job for him to do.  She also never thanks him for the work he’s done. Even when he spends the day in the kitchen with her canning beans, she doesn’t say thank you to her son. Most of the time, she seems not grateful but angry, especially when she thinks he is enjoying himself.

 

I look forward to seeing what you come up with for this assignment.

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Here is Alice's response:

 

 

Leslie is a girl who is very active and sunshine. I think she just even don’t have any trouble although she sometimes could be more special from others. She can always make people laugh and she’s good at imagining fairytales. Leslie first had the idea with creating Terabithia, so that’s how they had the adventures.

 

 

Leslie, one of those important characters in Bridge to Terabithia. I think she is tremendously imaginative. She always have her own style, even everybody incomprehension on her. Leslie imagine a world call Terabithia, this world is so big, so beautiful. She uses her true heart to build Terabithia, a magical kingdom. Only keep your mind wide open, you’ll see the kingdom. She also can just use her mind to make her dive feel. Even she never does that before. I think the writer want to tell the readers on Leslie is: just be yourself, don’t care what are the others say. And keep your mind wide open, do not constraint you ideas.

Wow! Do not constrain your ideas? Your vocabulary just gets more and more impressive.  And absolutely, perhaps the most striking thing about Leslie is the power of her imagination, and you do a great job citing  specific examples from the book that show her imagination. That's exactly what I was looking for.  I have a couple of additional comments to make via e-mail. Great work.

    Janice is a big bully in the book Bridge to Terabithia. She let little girl students pay a dollar to her if they want to go to the toilet. She also stole May Belle's snack. She is a bad bad guy. But I think she is strong. Although her father often beat her, but she does not cry every time. She bully the others then the other students can not bully her. She pretend she is so strong and she's a bully, but she is really a weak girl.

Hello,Laraine  

     In the book Bridge to Terabithia, Leslie is a girl who that so full of imagination. At first, she and Jess became friends. She imagined their own kingdom: Terabithia. In some, Jess and she didn't went to Terabithia. When they came to there again, she imagined there were many enemies so they pretended  to beat them back. About Easter time, it always rains. For us, we only think the weather is bad. But Leslie thinks about there are something evil do this, and she with Jess goes to the grove of pines. She imagines there are old spirits around the grove, and she can talk to them. She begs them stop the evil things and stop the rain.

    Isn't she a imaginative girl?

 

 

Hi Enya, I'm fully in agreement. You and Cindy have convinced me. At first, I thought Leslie's chief characteristic was her individualism (She went her own way and made her own rules). But the more I think about, the more I agree, it is her imagination that makes her special. I need a few days because of the work I have to do on my books, but I'll write more about this via e-mail. L.

@ Mark, Hmm, very interesting discussion of Janice's character. Nicely written too, although the assignment was about Leslie. The only thing I'm not sure I agree with is that Janice is a "weak" girl. I think of her more as a girl suffering some heartbreak and being a bully because the world has taught her to hurt others as she has been hurt. 

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