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Reading Assignment: Please reading pages 25-55, Chapters 4-9

 

Writing Assignment: Please write one long paragraph or two short ones describing how life for Wilbur starts out once Fern has rescued him versus his life once he goes to Uncle Homer's farm. To direct the reader's attention to how life is going to change for Wilbur, use the time transition we talked about in class, "In apple blossom time."  

 

That means when you have finished describing how Wilbur's life starts out, you should prepare the reader for a change based on time and use the apple blossom phrase to do it. One possibility might go something like this: "But when apple blossom time arrived...." or else "The arrival of apple blossom time brought with it big changes." Also possible is, "Apple blossom time did not bring good news for Wilbur." There are, in fact, many was to create a transition using the phrase "apple blossom time."

 

If possible, make one of your sentences match the pattern we discussed in class. In that pattern, the opening words set the time, for instance,  "After Fern adopted Wilbur...." Then the writer introduces the real message of the sentence, for instance: "After Fern adopted Wilbur, the little pig could not have been happier." Those opening time setters should always be set off with a comma. 

 

 

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    After Fern saved Wilbur under father's axe, Wilbur's life had changed. He lived with Fern like one part of her family. They play together, have fun together.Wilbur just like a part of Fern family. When apple blossom time arrived, Wilbur moved to Mr. Homer's farmand lived with other animals. They became good friends and a lot of interesting things had happened there.

This is very nicely written. You are such a great writer, though, I was hoping for you to describe Wilbur's loneliness and attempt to escape after he arrived at Uncle Homer's.    Still this is very nice work, and I particularly like the opening sentence and the way it indicated the time. That made the shift to apple blossom time even smoother. Nicely done.

Hello,Laraine

   After Fern adopted Wilbur,Wilbur's life changed.He will not die by the ax. He can have a happy and nice life with Fern and her family. When he feels tired,he can have a nap with Fern's pretty doll;When he feels hungry he can drink milk; When he feels boring he can play…… I think in those times Wilbur has a happiest life that a pig can have. But when apple blossom time arrived,Wilbur went to Fern's uncle's barn. He lose his freedom.  At first,he didn't have any friend,didn't have any fun, he was unhappy. But he made some friends at last and his friends helped him a lot.

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