Reading and Writing Assignment 8th class 9/3/15

Hello，Laraine

    I think Dahl wants Charlie to become a compassionate boy. When Charlie's family are starve, Charlie's parens want to give their food o Charlie. But Charlie knows that they are hungry to. So even Charlie is hungry and needs more nourishment, he still didn't eat them and give them back to his parents. I think Charlie is lucky, too. The other four children that got the Golden Ticket are all rich and bought a lots of Wonka's Candy. Only Charlie is poor, he just bought four Candies (One was his birthday present. One was his grandfather took a gamble. Two are he bought by the money he picked on the ground.)and he got the last Goleden Ticket.

    I think Charlie is a sensible and humble kid, when he had his birthday chocolate, he knew that his family are all hungry. So he knew that he should make his family be not hungry, too and wanted to give a part of his chocolate to his granparent. So although he is not really rich even don't have enough for eating, he is still the happiest kid in the children can go into the chocolate factory. Maybe the god likes the good boy like Charlie, too. So he only bought four chocolate then get a golden ticket.

Charlie, the main character in Roald Dahl’s Charlie and the chocolate factory. In my thought, Charlie is a boy who is poor but he can seek his dream. Even the dream really won’t come true. In the story, when Charlie know about the golden ticket , he try to use all ways to find the golden ticket to go to the chocolate factory. And in the midst of Charlie finding the golden ticket, he lost thrice. But he isn’t stop, he is still finding. Charlie never lost his belief to find the ticket. And at last he really find it and go to the factory. ‘where there is a will there is a way.’                 

@Enya

I really like the way you created a two-part structure, introducing first one key characteristic and then the other. I think, too, that the evidence you cite from the book is excellent. It clearly supports what you say are Charlie's characteristics. I will e-mail you some additional comments. L.

@ Cindy

Ooh, what a lovely sentence both in content and complexity: Charlie is a boy who is poor but he can seek his dream. And wow, what a great conclusion! Have some additional comments to make, which I send via e-mail.  L. P.S.  "Thrice," your vocabulary never ceases to impress. 

@ Mark,

Nice work. I love that conclusion. Very clever!