Originally Posted by Nicole:
Homework1: 1-murmur: They speak a little bit loudly, so I can hear their murmur. 2-pang: They know from the doctor that her pang didn’t stop, the doctor thought they should stop curing. 3-When an apple is on one side, and a bunch of flowers is on the other side, the balance will not be lopsided. Homework2: At cold winter day in February, Sadako was find she has leukemia. Her parents, brothers and sisters were very sad and they hope Sadako will be recovery soon. One of her best friend named Chizuko gives Sadako an idea. She thought that if they make one thousand paper cranes, Sadako will be healthy. Homework3: 1-Is leukemia an incurable kind of disease? Homework4: I think Chizuko and Sadako will make one thousand paper cranes. And I think Sadako will be recovery soon.
Great job, Nicole! Lots of good thoughts posted here!
I should have told you this during class, but the word "pang" often comes in the form, "pang of ____(noun)"
For example, you could say, "Around dinner time, I felt a pang of hunger" or "When I could not find my favorite pencil, I felt a pang of disappointment."
In your sentence, you can change it to say "They know from the doctor that her pang of pain didn't stop..."
For the word "lopsided," Shirley also made the same mistake. I will explain this word in class today.
Some wonderful thoughts on the summary and predictions! Here are some corrections for your summary:
Homework2: At On a cold winter day in February, Sadako was find finds out she has leukemia. Her parents, brothers and sisters were very sad and they hope Sadako will be recovery recover ["recover" is a verb by itself, so you can just use it on its own] soon. One of her best friends named Chizuko gives Sadako an idea. She thought that if they make one thousand paper cranes, Sadako will be healthy.
Homework4: I think Chizuko and Sadako will make one thousand paper cranes. And I think Sadako will be recovery recover soon.