Originally Posted by Max Fu:
In the book, Katie and Lynn was in difficult to choose to lie or do not lie to uncle, so they need to have a decision. In my life, I once had a difficult time to solve a problem, and that is to change a school. One month ago, I was in a normal middle school, and my parents found a peccable experimental middle school which like a international school in Shanghai. I went to the school and had a school trip which lead by a student in the class. At first, when I first step into the school, I wondered if this school is better than my old school because of the outside appearance of the school which is old and stereotype. And the part of the experimental one is deep inside of the school. I was hating about this kind of design. But when I got into the international part of the school, it is extremely different, and it subvert the idea I view this school. The teachers are foreigners and the students are abundant to speak Chinese unless this is a Chinese class. This attract my eyes. But the one which interrupt me the most is at first I was test for grade 7, which grade I was, but my parents and I both thought that this grade is far too low for my level. So after a few asking, I was accepted go to grade 8 and have classes. Because grade 8 there is really challenging which I was like to, so I decided to go to this school.
Hi Max, thank you for sharing your perspectives of the constant internal battle of making the decision of telling the truth and hurting someone's feelings Katie endures. Like Lynn and Katie, we all struggle with hurting peoples' feelings. We weigh our decisions and predict outcomes to maintain some sort of peaceful environment or relationship. On changing your school, though you had a say in the matter, your parents' heavily influenced where and the type of school you attended, because of your age. Conversely, though you had issues making new friends at your new school, you became friends with students experiencing difficulties, similar to you, of assimilating into a new school and space. You did a great job with the assignment, and I like your use of words such as peccable and subvert; however, please check the meaning of words before using them to ensure that you're using them in context to convey your thoughts and enrich your writing. Also if you can, read over your work and make edits. Again, you did a wonderful job on this week's assignment, keep using new words to bolster (strengthen) your writing