Hi Sally-- cool, your idea is different then some of your classmates, and you give good reasons for your argument! Here are some English corrections: in the second sentence, "into" should be one word. Later, you should state, "I think I would not go back for Ramo." You should join your last two sentences as one, "Ramo is not a little kid anyway, and he knows how to live for a short time, so we can pick him up after the storm."
Originally Posted by Sally:
Because of the storm,the boat couldn't stay long. Ramo went back to get his fishing spear so he missed the boat. When Karana saw his brother on the beach, she jumped in to the water and swam back to the island. The boat went away. I think I will not go back for Ramo. Chief Matasaip said that the ship will come back for him. And if I'm on the ship, I can tell the captain that someone is still on the island. But if I go back to Ramo, no one will realize that some is not on the boat, and maybe we can't survive on the island. Ramo is not a little kid anyway, he know how to live for a short time. So we can pick him up after the storm.