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1. Becoming a Master Student is famous study skills book in the United States. In it, the author uses a number of different techniques to encourage college students to define their goals. One of them fits the novel we are reading this week, The Westing Game, which features a lengthy obituary crucial to understanding Mr.Westing's character (pp.18-20). Following the advice of Becoming a Master Student,  please write your own obituary indicating what you would like to accomplish in your life that people will remember when you are no longer alive to remind them.

 

Include as well a section like the one on page 18, where the subject of the obituary responded to a question about the secret of his success and a second section like the one on page 20, where someone evaluates the subject of the obituary. (This assignment is a good one to focus on getting your verbs to match up with shifts in time from present to past)

 

2. Please also read the following essay by Henry Lau (the lawyer, not the singer), which he wrote when he was a student at Yale. Be prepared to discuss the answer to these questions in class: (1) For Lau, what is "ghettoness"? and (2) What motivated Lau to be a superior student, whose essay got written up in the pages of the New York Times?

 

http://www.ruf.rice.edu/~macro...e/ghetto/ghetto.html

 

 

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Silver Fu, the co-founder of world’s most successful travel corporation, SilverPark Hotel Co. Ltd., was found dead in his mansion near West Lake in Hangzhou, China last night. He was ninety-eight years old.

Born in a small town in Zhejiang Province, which is located on the eastern coast of China, he started to become obsessed with the travel industry since his childhood. With the guide of his parents, he traveled to various places within China when he was very young. He went on to travel to many countries in Southeast Asia and America with some experience of what truly makes a traveler happy and enjoyable.

With the dream of transformational world-class education, he made a big decision, to study aboard in the United States for his high school when he was sixteen. He was hard-working during his first three years in U.S., and he went on to Cornell for his undergraduate degree in Hotel Administration. In these four years, he hardly slept before 12am. He made every opportunity to intern in great travel companies in this country, such as United Airlines, Expedia, and Marriott Hotel Group. With this precious empirical experience and some first-hand data, he, and his roommate Tom Park, who was also passionate about travel industry and shared same view with him, co-founded SilverPark Hotel Co. Ltd.

From then on, a new era of travel began. The first SilverPark Hotel opened in Shanghai at July, 2029. Mr. Fu and Mr. Park were the first ever to create an “urban-resort”. It was not a resort building within the city. Rather, the hotel greatly promoted a lifestyle consisted of living refreshingly and being close to the nature.

“There are not so many social norms in the hotel”, said Silver, “we understand the pressure of modern city life, and one of our initial aims is to create a place for people to get out of routine to be who they truly are while staying in the hotel”. When stepping into the “urban-resort”, a wonderful and light scent of white tea would float into your nostrils immediately. Smiles were just everywhere around the hotel. You could grab some fresh fruit or hot cookies in corners if you want. A gym was built within the roof garden with access for everyone. To increase hotel’s sustainability, guests would get bonus directly on their bill from saving water. Most wonderfully, every staff was ready to chat freely with guests under the condition that privacy was highly guaranteed, which enabled Mr. Fu to redefine hospitality, one of the most significant terms and concepts in travel industry. He said that serving cordially was no more important than building a tight and intimate relationship between customers. This conception of hospitality was continued to be taught and used till today.

SilverPark Shanghai was just an astonishing success. Later on, Hong Kong, San Francisco, London, New York, Singapore, SilverPark grew rapidly into cosmopolitan cities. Apart from what mentioned before, every SilverPark Hotel combined the Oriental elements with local culture in addition of its’ urban-resort conception. What made everyone shocked again was the most frequent guests of these hotels are NOT travelers, but local dwellers who wanted to spend a fascinating vacation.

When asked his secret of success, the entrepreneur always replied: “follow your idea, work hard and never doubt yourself”. Mr. Fu actually is this kind of person all his life. He made careful plans for every hotel he was about to open. He always stayed up all the night for a groundbreaking idea.

“The star of the whole hotel industry now falls, and we are so sad about that,” said a spokesman for Tony Alexander, president and CEO of Starwood Hotel Group. Jake Smith, Executive Manager of SilverPark, stated, “I and my colleagues are so sad about the upsetting message of Silver. We would all carry on with Mr. Fu’s great idea and keep making every guest of us refreshed.” 

Silver, This is totally fabulous. I was worried that the assignment might have too many elements to it and prove  too difficult. But once again, Mr. Fu, you nailed it.

 

I will make some more academic comments via e-mail, but they are very, very minor. You followed exactly the format discussed in class, and did so at an imaginative level that exceeded my wildest dreams.

 

You made me wish the Silver Park Hotel was already in existence, and I am glad you imagined a long life with huge achievements. That's the first step to making it happen. Laraine

 

 

After Yao Ming retired, Jason Ye is another superstar in the NBA as a Chinese. In his career, he got a lot of honor: “ Rookie of the year, thirteen times in the all-stars, MVP of the all-stars game four times, MVP of the five times, NBA champion five times, MVP of the NBA finals for five times, and he is the only one Chinese player got into the hall of fame.

 

  Jason Ye, he died when he was eighty-six years old, he was found in his hotel in the Chicago.

 

  Jason was born in a Chinese family, when he was young; he loved playing basketball very much. “You will not able to play in the NBA.” His friends and parents always said to him. “ Working can change everything.”

 

  When he was eighteen years old, he went to the US for studying, he went into the Duke University that is famous for its basketball.

 

  When he told everybody, he wanted to go to the NBA, no one agreed with him. Firstly, he is an Asian, basketball is the black’s sport, and Asians could not do well on it. Secondly, he only 183cm tall, he won’t get any advantage. But he believed, nothing is impossible.

 

  When he finished his studying, he went to the NBA and Picked by the Philadelphia in the first round. “ Again, here another silly Asian want to stand in the NBA, let see how he doing.” “ There would no another Asian can play better than Yao, actually, Yao is no that good.” So many questions came out at the moment.

 

  But everyone was wrong, when Jason went onto the court, there was such a kind of glitter on him, he was so amazing in the game. Then he began his long way in the NBA, and he won a lot of honor.

 

   “When I say Ye, what do you think of?” “He is a great player, he is an another superstar in China after Yao retired. He play against the stereotype, he want to show us that basketball not the American sport, nothing is difficult for him.” Kobe Bryant said.

 

 

 

@Jason, This is wonderful! It covered all the elements we discussed in class and added a whole new level of detail to your writing.  I like too the way you got a reference to kira-kira glitter into the reading.

 

I will send you a more academic response via e-mail but it will only cover issues of grammar and punctuation. The structure is exactly right, and you did a great job on this assignment.  I hope you are as pleased as I am. L.

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