Homework Assignments for 6/14

Of course, I have done something really evil because of greed. When I was 3 or 4 years old, I like barbies very much. One day, when i went shopping with my mother, i saw a beautiful dolls in the barbie shop. I really wanted to buy it, however my mother refused to do it, since i had two boxes of barbies. After that, i felt really angry and frustrated, so i lied and wallowed on the floor. i kept hold the dolls in right hand and stretched my mother's leg with my left hand.

This is a hilarious story!  I love it!  I'm wondering what happened at the end of the story?  Can you imagine doing something like that in Willy Wonka's chocolate factory?  Here are a few grammar corrections you can be aware of: 

• In the second sentence, "like" will turn into "liked" since this was in the past.
• "i saw a beautiful dolls" has to be "a beautiful doll" or "beautiful dolls," but an "a" and plural can't go together most of the time.
• "i kept hold the dolls" can change to either "I kept a hold of the dolls" OR "I kept holding the dolls."

Last time, my family went to have a buffet. Because the restaurant was full of people so we had to wait the seats. When we began to have dinner, it was late and I could hear the sounds from my stomach. I went to get the food but I was lazy, I wanted to get more food at a time. So I put many food into the plate. But a plate can't afford too much food. On my way to my seat, unfortunately, some food fell from the plate and I made a mess on the groud.

Good example, Kitty!  I can imagine something like this happening in the story sometime in the future!  Here are some grammar thoughts I have for you:

• What do you mean by the introduction, "last time?"  Last night, last month, last year, last winter?  We'll talk about this in class.
• In the second sentence, you can choose between using "because" and "so."  They have similar meanings, so you don't need both.
• "So I put many food..." has to change to I put more food/a lot of food/tons of food/a pile of food.  The word "food" in this case is uncountable, so "many" can't work to describe it.