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@ Alfonso Well done.  This is my favorite sentence: "Even though it was dangerous and he didn’t have to save the children, he still ran with his best friend without thinking," and it certainly does support your choice. Great that you know the phrase "critical moment" and used it exactly right.  And your conclusion is absolutely perfect. For many writers, conclusions are the hardest part. But you have a gift for writing them. 

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