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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for 5/26/15 12th class"

Jackie, I really like the detail in your response. I can immediately visualize (see in my imagination) the picture that Sarah brought home. That's what specific details do. They make the reader see (and understand) what the writer is talking about.  And you are so right about the cause of the children's happiness. Sarah has brought the sea with her and never needs to leave in order to see it again. I notice, too, that you are working on your use of tense. Very well done! I am impressed. 

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