Reading and Writing Assignment for 11/6

When I am five years old, my parents take me to a park. The park is so big; it has a huge grass, a play ground and a lake. I always like to boat in the lake with my parents, flying kites on the grass and playing in the play ground. But one time, when I climb up the slide, I put my head out and shout:”Mom can you see me? I am really high!”but I put my head out too much, I fall down on my head down at once, I am cry loud. My mom run behind me at once and look after me. This matter make me learn don’t put your head out the high thing, you maybe fall down. 

This is wonderful, Cindy! I can see you on that slide and how excited you must have been to show your mother.  Yes, those "high things" can be dangerous! Great work, exactly what the assignment called for. Thank you! Laraine

    I had an excting experience five months ago. On a weekend in Canada, my good friend, Braydon Bartlett, he teached me to drive a dirt bike! At seven o'clock in the morning, he woke me up. Then, we went to the garage and unlock it and drove the dirt bike out of the garage. After he showed me where are the accelerator, brake, clutch, gears and showed me how to drive it, he let me drive the dirt bike a lap. I drove the bike very carefully, carefully like walk on a tightrope. When I can drive the dirt bike well, Braydon teached me when I drive the dirt bike faster, how to shift gears and drive it faster. When I have learned how to drive the dirt bike, we drive into the hill and woods. We had a good time.

Very nice Mark. I can imagine that you had a wonderful time. I would have liked to hear more, though, about what made it so memorable. Was it the speed of the bike?. Or maybe you just like learning new things? I very much like your simile:like walking on a tightrope. I am impressed that you could spell the different parts of the bike. 

    I had an excting experience five months ago. On a weekend in Canada, my good friend, Braydon Bartlett, he teached me to drive a dirt bike! At seven o'clock in the morning, he woke me up. Then, we went to the garage and unlock it and drove the dirt bike out of the garage. After he showed me where are the accelerator, brake, clutch, gears and showed me how to drive it, he let me drive the dirt bike a lap. I drove the bike very carefully, carefully like walk on a tightrope. When I can drive the dirt bike well, Braydon teached me when I drive the dirt bike faster, how to shift gears and drive it faster.

    When I have learned how to drive the dirt bike, we drive into the hill and woods. The bike was fast like wind. When I drive it fast, I felt like I am going to fly. That is awesome! We went back home in the afternoon. We had a good time. 

    This experience makes me never forget it, I hope I can have a chance to drive the dirt bike again.

@Mark,

Yes, that's precisely what I meant. Now  I understand exactly why the experience was  so memorable. Those were the perfect details to add, that the bike was "fast like the wind" and it made you feel as if you could fly.  Thank you for revising (re-doing) the end to better fit the assignment.  Excellent job!   Laraine

Hello,Laraine

        That was the first day I learned violin.The teacher said:"Now, put your hand on the fiddlestick like this."then Teacher show us how to have a good posture on the fiddlestick,I just try to follow it,but it was hard .Teacher correct us a lot of times,But we still can't do it well,and the teacher ungry,she catch some students that were not listen to her carefully,"You guys!Get off of here!"I was very scared the teacher maybe pick me off of the classroom too.Finally,The teacher calmed down.I learned we have to serious in the class, and don't make the teacher ungry in this matter.

Well Enya, I can certainly see why this experience stuck with you. And what you learned from it makes a lot of sense.  I hope, too, that you are now enjoying your lessons a little bit more.  Nice work. Thank you for describing this memory.

See you soon, Laraine

P.S. I bet you are very good at playing the violin.