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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for May 19th 13th class"

@Cindy You didn't hurt my feelings. I worry, too, that we, Americans that is, can't stop discrminating against others, even though we finally managed to make an African-American president, an act that made me proud but certainly did not eliminate all discrimination against any number of people of different colors and beliefs.

You do an excellent job of showing how Kadahota shows discrimination, and I like, in particular, the lines "Lynn pulls her back into fact (my favorite part). She told Katie the truth: (Perfect use of the colon) maybe they will discriminate against you."

As always, you have a lovely and poetic way with words. Great too that you used "plight" correctly and know the correct preposition to use with discriminate (against). 

I will send you some additional comments via e-mail. Really nice work and some lovely writing. 

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