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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignment for 7th Class 4/7/16"

Wow, Alfonso, what an imagination you have.  I like how you even added the "sound of the fireplace." What a perfect detail to convey to the reader the comforting and comfortable atmosphere you had in mind. Plus, many of the sentences are spot on perfect: They do not have a single error.  I'll send you some comments via e-mail. This is great. 

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