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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for 9/1/16 26th class"

 This section is beautifully written, not an error to be found: "Although I don't play the piano, I understand how Billie Jo feels. It's the same way I feel when I play my electric guitar. I turn up the volume and play my favorite song. " Plus a nice smooth transition (see bold), and I love the metaphor about wanting to play music being like a hunger for food. Excellent work. 

 

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