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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for 8/11/16 23 rd class"

Great, and yet another theory of how the two narratives, or story lines,  come together. I like, too, that stylish opening sentence. Perfect use of the colon and semi colon, plus it's a sentence with an interesting word arrangement that encourages readers to read further.

I like, too, what you did here: "The time is different, people are different, and difficulty is also different. But the place is same, in Sudan."  Parallelism inside short sentences with a contrast at the end, very nice. You are thinking like a writer. I like to see that.

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