@ Alfonso Good, clear opening statement, and you certainly make your case for Lennie being the kind of character who can't help himself, which is very typical for the characters in a naturalist piece of fiction. There is some very nice writing in this assignment, for instance: "Though he thought he was only touching the soft dress gently, in other people’s eyes, he was hurting the girl." You also did a nice job using repetition with variation to make connections between sentences:
He didn’t fit this world because he was so simple and did everything without thinking. In this cruelworld, only the ones who fit could survive, so you needed to try your best to learn everything that would help you!"
I'll send you an e-mail as well.