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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for 4/21/16 9th class"

And here is my response to Mark's response:

Wow! You just get better and better. I love the conclusion, which makes a nice closing point about the relationship as a whole.  That's a good concluding technique.

You have also really mastered the way to write about literature. You make your point and then you implicitly say to the reader, "And here's why a I think that." Then you include appropriate pieces of the text to prove that you should be taking seriously. Just terrific.

I will send you some further comments via e-mail (after I finish my comments on the previous assignment. Sorry for the delay. I am, as we say in the States, swamped with work)

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