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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments for 10th class 4/28/16"

This is a lovely piece of writing with some lovely sentences. You did a great job identifying what kept the girls together despite that awful Amber, and an equally excellent job using transitions like "At the beginning of the book" to keep your reader in touch with your train of thought.  You also used a very clear and graceful conclusion to bring the writing to a close. I will e-mail you some additional comments. But, in general, this is really great!

Last edited by Laraine
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