Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignments 12th Class 5/12/16"

LaraineMember

This is just tremendous. You get better and better by the week. Your use of transitions is really improving as is your use of evidence from the book. Each sentence moves smoothly into the next and neatly sets the stage so the reader can follow,

Your use of evidence could not be better: "Unfortunately, a trap hurt Sam. I think that’s not a good way to punish the trespasser. This makes me feel that Mr. Lyndon is a violent and cold-blooded person. I don’t think he put the trap to catch animals. " Absolutely, I don't think for a second tha trap was for animals, and even if it were, it would suggest much the same thing. I will send you a couple of comments via e-mail.

Great conclusion!

5/13/167:32 PM

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