Skip to main content

Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignment for 7th Class 4/7/16"

This is just beautiful, and the writing is very advanced, as in this series:

"They are the people who were released before. Old people, kids who were released because they are not healthy enough, people who asked for releasing like Rosemary. " Also, I like how you weave your references to the text in as you do here, "people who ask for releasing like Rosemay."

Very imaginative,too, it's great how you managed to get the animals added to the community and  how you made the first group Jonas encountered be members who had been released. 

Absolutely terrific response!

Last edited by Laraine
×
×
×
×