Hi Alice, Nicely done. I am especially fond of this sentence:"From this book, we can clearly see that although Lennie is a tall man, but he doesn’t have initiative, maybe because his head can’t run so fast." We would say " "because he can't think very quickly" or "because he is slow-witted." However, I like your phrasing better.
I am interested, though, in what adjectives Steinbeck used to describe the two men as the model I gave shows. Perhaps we can talk about this in class on Thursday.
I was impressed with your use of the word "initiative" and the very common expression "to know a thing or two." Your grasp of English vocabulary is so-o-o impressive.