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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignment for 13th Class 3/26/15"

Nice work Mark. You used events from the book to show Leigh's unhappiness. I hope the next time, though, that you will include some quotations.

 

 The incident about the cigarettes does show Shirley's confidence.I would have liked, though, to have an incident different from the example I gave. If you get a chance, could you revise to include a different incident showing her confidence.

 

I have a couple of other comments that I will send you via e-mail.  Laraine

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