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Reply to "Reading and Writing Assignment for 12th class 3/19/15"

@ Mark.

 

I think he is honest too, and I like how you pointed out that Leigh doesn't just tell Mr. Henshaw nice things as proof of his honesty.

 

You are also getting really skillful about how you link sentences together with transitions. This one is especially good:"From his letter, we can see his emotion changes."

 

It's also great that you understand how his change in language reflects his change in mood. Being able to make those connections between the words the author used and the feelings they suggest is very important. Everything about your writing just gets better and better.  Best, Laraine.

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