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Dear Bob, These are good beginning ideas, though I was looking for a much longer, more developed response. You mentioned Stanley became good at making friends; How did he bond with these new friends, what did he learn from them? You also mention Stanley became stronger by digging holes-- is he stronger only physically, or mentally as well? These are all questions you can use to expand your response! Next time, keep writing… Originally Posted by bob:

Stanley was fat, but after he dug many holes, he became stronger and less fat. He wasn't good at making friends, but he is now. 

 

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